LOCKSLEY IS COMING TO AN END...
And is it goes behind the PAYWALL, I tell you what I have in store for the future, and where it is going.
This is the TABLE OF CONTENTS for my serial Novel THE SHIELD OF LOCKSLEY.
The reason I’m putting this up here is so that you can read it for yourself and see where the story is going. I have TWO posts remaining, and then PART ONE will be finished. After that, the story goes up behind the PAYWALL. There will be no little pieces to tease readers into signing up. You’ve either read it and want to continue, at the dirt cheap, rock bottom price of $6 for the year, or a couple of bucks a month, or you haven’t. If you haven’t signed up yet, the price will be going back up to its regularly posted price of $30 for the year, or $10 per month.
What is the story about?
I’m glad you asked. It’s the story of a young Knight during the “end years” of Camelot. Locksley, Prince of Ivanore, Knight of the Field, Knight of Inverness Beyond-the-Wall, is on his way to Camelot, hoping to participate in the Tournament of Youth — his first — since taking part in the final battle of The War Of The Twelve Kings, where he saves King’s Pellinore’s life and is Knighted as a result. (Before this he served as Sir Gurmmer’s Squire.) The truth of that battle will come out, and the results of that story will influence the rest of the tale.
On the way to Camelot with his uncle, Sir Grummer, as well the his two Men-at-Arms, Geoffrey and Godfrey, together known as The Boys, they come across Ector deMaris — the half-brother of Sir Lancelot — camped out in a field. Together, the three Knights make their way South, toward Camelot, when they stop in at the Inn of The Red Lion. It is here, at The Red Lion, that LOCKSLEY takes on Brennis as his Squire, and Grummer and Ector deMaris are attacked by the Orkney Knights and taken hostage for some unknown reason. (Locksley, at the time, being the new kid on the block, has been given first choice with the whores and is upstairs in a room as the Orkneys attack.) Grummer sneaks up the stairs and locks Locksley in the room. The two Knights are taken to Turquin’s Keep — Turquin being a Knight known to trap other Knights and sell them off to the Gaelic Celts coming over from Gaul, who then sell them to Arab slave dealers.
Locksley, Brennis, and The Boys, come across Lamorak deGales who makes a point of traveling with them. As they travel, they discover the Queen is on the trail in search of Lancelot who has left Court and is roaming about the countryside. With the Queen are also Sir Tristan, who is escorting his uncle’s new wife, Isoude, back to Cornwall, and King Pellinore, Lamorak’s father.
Are you with me so far?
Pellinore (the man our hero Locksley saved during the final Battle of The War of The Twelve Kings — and the man who made him a Knight), is traveling with his daughter, and his niece (Miriam and Gwenellyn) to Camelot in order to find suitable husbands for them; along with them, Tristan and Isoude, are with the Queen as she searches for Lancelot.
Locksley, and Lamorak are setting out to rescue Ector deMaris and Grummer. They come across Palomides, a Saracen Knight who rides a camel, as well as his Squire who also has a camel. Locksley, upon hearing the Queen has riders with her, approaches and hopes to get help. Unfortunately, Pellinore has suffered from a stroke, so everything is somewhat disrupted and chaotic. The Queen tells him he’s on his own. Pellinore’s daughter, Miriam, dubs him as The Beggar’s Knave, as Grummer has long been known as The Beggar Knight.
Locksley leaves, and the next day they run into Lancelot. He’s looking for his nephew, Lionel, when he discovers that Grummer, and his half-brother Ector deMaris, have been taken captive. He promises to help.
That almost sets us up for the big showdown and the end of part one. But first, with Pellinore now unable to issue commands, Miriam takes over and they pack up camp to follow the Queen. As the camp is being taken down, Miriam goes into the woods where there is a hot spring and the camp is attacked by Gaelic Celts under the command of Accolon…who just happens to be one of the lovers of the Queen, Moragna LeFey. Her other lover also happens to be Sir Turquin.
Accolon attacks Pellinore’s camp, but they remaining soldiers and Huntsmn as able to fend them off. They cannot, however, prevent the abduction of Gwenellyn. She, along with several of the camp Followers (read Whores, here) ar brought to Turquin’s Keep, where the Queen Moragna Le Fey is with her lover, Sir Turquin.
Turquin kills Accolon, the Gaul, as well as his mercenaries in what can only be considered a ruthless double-cross.
Gwenellyn, as a witness to this crime, is now cast into the dungeons with other women, waiting to be sold into slavery.
Locksley and Brennis break into the Keep as Lamorak and Lancelot attack the Keep and face Turquin and his own Mercenaries. Locksley is captured and cast into the cell just as he opens the door to Gwenellyn’s cell. Turquin is killed by Lancelot. Lamorak sets into battle against the failing mercenaries as Morgana sets the Keep on fire in order to make her escape.
Locksley uses his sword to break down the door, but breaks his sword as he does. He manages to rescue (the Princess) Gwenellyn, and comes across Brennis who has rescued all of the other captive women, as well as the Knights locked up with Grummer and Ector deMaris.
They are all reunited and set of for Camelot. Locksley, however, is smitten with the young princess (Lamorak’s Cousin), and swears to wed the girl as soon as possible.
That is the gist of it. It is an endless rollicking adventure — oh yeah, did I tell you that the Orkney Knights attack the camp and The Boys are sorely wounded? No? Well, the Orkney Knights attack the Camp and The Boys, (Godfrey and Geoffrey), are sorely wounded.
And that, in a nutshell, is PART ONE.
All of that is up for you to read, for FREE. It will stay up as FREE, while I put up PART TWO, which will NOT be free. PART TWO is going up behind the PAYWALL. Part two is The Tournament of Youth.
And what makes my King Arthur story different from all the rest?
I’ve gone back to the source for my story. I am using Sir Thomas Mallory’s LE MORTE D’ARTHUR as my only reference book. I’m using CHAP GPT for my research. Let me explain CHAP GPT to you. It’s AI, sure, I get that, but it’s what you want as a research tool. I’ll give you an example. I wanted to know what they used as windows back in the 5th Century, so wrote the question: What did they use in place of glass for windows? It gave me three answers. One was leather hide. and the one that struck me as the coolest, was HORN. They took the horn of cattle, or oxen, soaked them, and when they became soft, cut them down the middle and opened them up. Then they soaked them again, and laid them out to flatten them. Then they shaved them so that they became thin, and almost translucent. You couldn’t see through them, but the light was able to penetrate. It’s worlds away from Googling a question. Instead of being sent to a web sight, it simply tells you the answer you’re looking for. Do you want to know the names of the different parts of armour they wore? They didn’t wear armour. They wore chain mail. You see?
I don’t use it for plotting, or editing, or writing. It’s the greatest research tool I’ve ever seen. I love it.
How many parts are there for the story, if this is only PART ONE?
PART TWO, is THE TOURNAMENT OF YOUTH. Locksley has to gather up his ‘armour’, as it was all lost during the rescue of Gwenellyn from Turquin’s Keep. His horse has been crippled and has to be put down because one of the Orkney Knights did something dastardly. (Can’t tell ya, that would spoil it.)
PART THREE is THE BOOK OF LAMORAK DeGALES, which follows our hero on a quest and includes a single chapter broken into ten parts, each subtitled. It’s so cool, and comes in at about forty pages.
PART FOUR is THE PAPAL DECREE wherein the Pope declares war on the fledgling Camelot.
PART FIVE is Locksley’s Quest…
And that brings about the end of the story.
How long is this going to be?
That’s the interesting part, isn’t it? I don’t have a plot, and I don’t think too much about that. I have a Table Of Contents that I use, and while the titles of the chapters guide me through the story, a lot of what the titles tell us, don’t give a lot away. I have page numbers. The numbers in Italics are guesses as to how long the chapters are going to be, and I try to stick to it. Chapters range anywhere from 7-10 pages. Some are longer.
There are only 26 PAID subscribers, and I have a question for you…
Do you care as to how long the chapters are? Do you want the chapters broken into sections? That would make it three or sometimes four weeks to read a chapter. Once this goes up, it will be returning to the once a week format of Wednesday postings. I can put a chapter up for every week, which is not an inconvenience for me at all. If I break the chapters up, it will just take longer to read the whole story. As of this moment, I am writing CHAPTER 25. That’s the second chapter of PART THREE. It doesn’t look like I’m going to have a lot of readers here. No one wants to take me up on the Sizzling Summer Sale (well, a few did, but not as many as I thought would.) They say no one wants to pay for fiction and that pretty well proved it, didn’t it? People are willing to read my stuff for free, but draw the line when it comes time to pay for it…even at $30 for the year…which is about 8¢ a day, or $6 for the year, which is ridiculous!
Well, it is what it is, right? In the meantime, I’m writing this and LOVIN’ it! I mean, everything is moving along swimmingly. I’m looking to make this either three, or five books. I have Modred — he’s the BAD guy so there’s no spoiler there if you know your Arthurian history (everyone knows that, right?) — and you’ll be able to see him as he conspires against the King.
Hopefully, we’ll get more readers here. Hopefully, when I finish this, I’ll have enough PAID readers that I can self-publish/print this up and send everyone a copy. There are so many printers out there that it really is simple. I just need the money to get that done, and that comes from PAID Subscribers.
So after tomorrow’s chapter, we’ll have one more left. That’s when the Sizzlin’ Summer Sale ends, (85% off) and the price of $6/year, goes back up to the regular $30 for the year, and $10/month instead of the $2.75 ‘ish.
And I’m going to post the TABLE OF CONTENTS, so you can see how it’s progressing.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
PROLOGUE
i
IN THE BEGINNING page 8
ii
SOME YEARS AFTER page 14
PART ONE
THE BEGGAR’S KNAVE
CHAPTER ONE page 21
ON THE ROAD TO CAMELOT
CHAPTER TWO page 30
AT THE INN OF THE RED LION
CHAPTER THREE page 37
THE ORKNEY KNIGHTS
CHAPTER FOUR
THE QUEEN’S GAMBIT page 42
i THE LADY GWENELLYN page 44
ii IN THE CAMP OF THE QUEEN page 48
iii THE QUEEN’S BREAKFAST page 52
iv KING PELLINORE’S TALE page 57
v THE BEGGAR’S KNAVE page 61
CHAPTER FIVE page 65
OF PLOTS DEVIZED AND DEEDS
DONE IN THE DARK
CHAPTER SIX page 74
THE MORNING OF THE NEXT DAY
CHAPTER SEVEN page 80
THE BRIDGE AT HOLLYBOURNE
CHAPTER EIGHT page 87
PALOMIDES, THE PAGAN KNIGHT
CHAPTER NINE page 95
THE KNIGHT’S SQUIRE
CHAPTER TEN page 102
THE CASTLE IS A KEEP
CHAPTER ELEVEN page 113
CAPTIVES
CHAPTER TWELVE page 124
THE QUEEN MORGANA LeFAY
CHAPTER THIRTEEN page 131
THE LADY GWENELLYN
CHAPTER FOURTEEN page 143
THE WOMAN IN WHITE
PART TWO
THE TOURNAMENT OF YOUTH
CHAPTER FIFTEEN page 155
CAMELOT-A-MAYING; OR THE FLAG OF
THE FLAGONNED ALE
CHAPTER SIXTEEN page 165
IN THE QUEEN’S BEDCHAMBER
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN page 175
OF THE TABLE ROUND AND
SIR BEDIVERE’S PLOY
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN page 184
A LADY IN SEARCH OF A HERO
CHAPTER NINETEEN
A KNIGHT’S QUEST FOR ARMOUR page 196
i HIS HORSE page 201
ii HIS DOUBLET page 203
iii HIS SHIELD page 206
iv HIS SWORD page 209
CHAPTER TWENTY page 213
THE KNIGHT OF THE ROSE
CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE page 220
THE SPEAR AND SHIELD
CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO page 227
THE SWORD
CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE page 234
THE GARTER OF PEARLS; OR, THE KING’S BOON
PART THREE
THE BOOK OF LAMORAK DeGALES
CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR page 242
THE QUEST OF LAMORAK DeGALES
i THE LADY OF THE ROCK page 246
ii THE MANY LOVES OF SIR GRUMMER GRUMMORSON page 249
iii DECEPTION AND ESCAPE page 253
iv THE HUNTSMAN page 258
v THE RECLUSE page 262
vi THE KNIGHTS AT THE TAVERN page 266
vii THE QUEEN’S LONG SHADOW page 269
viii THE KNIGHT AT THE STREAM page 273
ix A SECOND CHANCE page 276
CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE page 281
THE KNIGHT AT INNMAN’S TAVERN
CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX page 284
THE REVENGE OF SIR AGRAVIANNE
CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN page 292
THE AMBASSADOR OF ROME
CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT page 300
THE FORTNIGHT’S END
CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE page 312
A KNIGHT OF THE ROUND TABLE
CHAPTER THIRTY page 321
THE QUEEN’S RIDE
CHAPTER THIRTY-ONE page 332
THE KNIGHTS OF BATH
CHAPTER THIRTY-TWO page 341
THE YOUNG KNIGHT PLAYS HIS ROLE
CHAPTER THIRTY-THREE page 353
IN THE SHADOW OF MORGANNA LeFAY
PART FOUR
THE PAPAL DECREE
CHAPTER THIRTY-FOUR
THE ROMAN WAR page 360
i A CALL TO ARMS page 364
ii THE BATTLE AT CANTERBURY page 367
iii THE BATTLE CONTINUES; THE SECOND DAY page 370
iv LOCKSLEY’S CAPTURE page 375
v HOW LAMORACK FARED, AND THE PROWESS
OF SIR GAWAIN page 379
vi LOCKSLEY’S ESCAPE page 382
vii PEACE page 386
CHAPTER THIRTY-FIVE page 390
TWO LOVERS REUNITED
CHAPTER THIRTY-SIX page 401
THE SUMMER OF LOVE
CHAPTER THIRTY-SEVEN page 411
SIR LANCELOT’S QUEST FOR ADVENTURE
CHAPTER THRITY-EIGHT page 421
THE RETURN OF SIR LAMORACK DeGALES
PART FIVE
LOCKSLEY’S QUEST
CHAPTER THRITY-NINE page 432
THE SEARCH FOR SIR LANCELOT
CHAPTER FORTY page 443
QUEEN MORGANNA LeFAY
CHAPTER FORTY-ONE page 453
THE ABDUCTION
CHAPTER FORTY-TWO page 462
LOCKSLEY’S QUEST
I BEAUMANIS page 465
II THE CASTLE AND THE DAMSEL page 469
III THE KNIGHT THAT CHALLENGED page 473
IV THE JOUST FOR THE LADY page 477
V BEAUMANIS RETURNS page 480
CHAPTER FORTY-THREE page 483
A KNIGHT WINS HIS VENGEANCE
CHAPTER FORTY-FOUR page 495
SIR LAMORACK FOLLOWS THE QUEEN
CHAPTER FORTY-FIVE page 503
THE KNIGHT AT THE BRIDGE
CHAPTER FORTY-SIX page 512
THE KNIGHT ON THE PLAIN
CHAPTER FORTY-SEVEN page 523
AT THE CASTLE OF MORGANNA LeFAY
CHAPTER FORTY-EIGHT page 534
CAPTIVES
CHAPTER FORTY-NINE page 545
SIR LAMORACK DeGALES IS FORCED TO ACT
CHAPTER FIFTY page 552
THE TELL-TALE HEART; OR THE KNIGHT
IN THE DUNGEON
CHAPTER FIFTY-ONE page 567
TRAGEDY AND DEATH
CHAPTER FIFTY-TWO page 576
THE UNHAPPY RETURN; OR
THE WINTER SOLSTICE
Afterword (This is part of the book, too.)
Hopefully, I’ll have all of this written by the end of this year. Then I can go back and make more edits, and maybe shop it around to publishers. Who knows, it might sell? I know a guy who had a book in his files and thought he’d send it off on a whim, and now he’s a best selling author with about eight or nine books out. (I won’t say his name because I try not to be a name dropper, but he’s a pretty big deal.)
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Ok, I have no problem with chapter length and honestly it would read a lot better longer I think rather than cut into sections that may affect how well I remember what happened when I pick it up again. ChatGPT for research? Ok, but did you check it for veracity? Chat GPT makes shit up. (Horn windows do sound cool and a quick Google revealed a neat book on Medieval life and that they were used through the 18th century!)