It was very subtle...I will fix it when I get back to the rewrite. Because when he says to her "That's why they pay me the big bucks," he changes from Whit to Ricky--but only long enough to let us know that he's inside his head somewhere. Like I said, I'll have to fix it on the rewrite. (I was hoping I might get away with it.) I'm glad you pointed it out though.
It was very subtle...I will fix it when I get back to the rewrite. Because when he says to her "That's why they pay me the big bucks," he changes from Whit to Ricky--but only long enough to let us know that he's inside his head somewhere. Like I said, I'll have to fix it on the rewrite. (I was hoping I might get away with it.) I'm glad you pointed it out though.
Was there a time change or flashback in the middle scene of this chapter? I wasn't sure if I totally understood that part...