A Story
What a moving story you've written! Not only can I feel the setting, but your characters and plot really pull at the heart strings.
You set a wonderful scene with so much subtle drama interwoven with it. I'm hooked!
I have just started this story now, Ben. It is a brilliant beginning -- it is so clear in its visuals, I am immersed in the "movie" of it already.
What a moving story you've written! Not only can I feel the setting, but your characters and plot really pull at the heart strings.
You set a wonderful scene with so much subtle drama interwoven with it. I'm hooked!
I have just started this story now, Ben. It is a brilliant beginning -- it is so clear in its visuals, I am immersed in the "movie" of it already.