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This is very good writing, Ben, very good indeed.

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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

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More than that, I was inspired to push my own bar higher. 🙏

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Apr 19, 2023Liked by Ben Woestenburg

Hi Ben, I liked the tensions in this story; those between the protagonists and also where they were going; would they get there without consequences; etc. Sincerely, Heather Podrow (a friend of Kim Waite).

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Apr 10, 2023Liked by Ben Woestenburg

Extraordinary story, Ben.

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“Cecil’s expecting me, and he’s only here until tomorrow,” he added, making sure to pick up his drink and drain the last of it. Father’s was the first funeral I’d ever been to.

Man! That really hits home. Gorgeous writing, Ben.

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Thank you! Merry Christmas and all the best to you and your loved ones!

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Well done Ben. I'll have to dip into the archives to see if you've published a second part.

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It's all there. I was supposed to put the second part up, but this was the only opportunity we had to decorate the house. It usually takes a couple of days. 🤷🏼

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