A lot of violence in the last couple of episodes. War does bring out the vile and rawness but I was expecting to hear what happens to Cecelia... Cliffhangers aplenty Ben.
I think you'll like the next one. It's so different. I'll be reading it out as well. But I'm going to read it out on my BOOK TUBE Channel, and have the text here. I'll link them and see what I can do to grow them both.
1) I'm not sure I know what you mean about the stars and the distinction between the two types of memory at the beginning. 2) I'm distressed that you are ending it right there (but it's a good kind of distress; a pleasing tension), and 3) I'm terribly distressed that it's almost over. No! It's can't actually be, can it?
Oh, I love to hear that kind of distress in your words! It's almost over, yes, but I have another story lined up that I've been working on--the kind that plays like a movie in your head...but don't they all?
Yes, it's short and I hate you a little bit right now for stopping when I was so into it, lol! Great stuff Ben.
And I hated to end it where I did, but breaking it up elsewhere just didn't work for me.
A lot of violence in the last couple of episodes. War does bring out the vile and rawness but I was expecting to hear what happens to Cecelia... Cliffhangers aplenty Ben.
Excellent, Ben. I hate to see this story end.
I think you'll like the next one. It's so different. I'll be reading it out as well. But I'm going to read it out on my BOOK TUBE Channel, and have the text here. I'll link them and see what I can do to grow them both.
1) I'm not sure I know what you mean about the stars and the distinction between the two types of memory at the beginning. 2) I'm distressed that you are ending it right there (but it's a good kind of distress; a pleasing tension), and 3) I'm terribly distressed that it's almost over. No! It's can't actually be, can it?
Oh, I love to hear that kind of distress in your words! It's almost over, yes, but I have another story lined up that I've been working on--the kind that plays like a movie in your head...but don't they all?