You have created a Russell and an Uncle Jack who are perfect foils for each other, Ben, with poor Danny in the middle trying to just be normal. Though he seems a little mystified by life, I would welcome Danny as a neighbor. The other two, not so much. Fine writing, my friend.
You have created a Russell and an Uncle Jack who are perfect foils for each other, Ben, with poor Danny in the middle trying to just be normal. Though he seems a little mystified by life, I would welcome Danny as a neighbor. The other two, not so much. Fine writing, my friend.
So, good, so real, so alive on the page, Ben!