"the memory of her soft kiss on my cheek lingers like the shadow of a wasted dream."
"Ronnie stands off to the side, watching with that patient awareness children seem to have whenever someone other than their father hugs their mother."
"... she’d heard from someone that this was a better deal; that someone usually being her mother."
Thank you so much for your kind words Sharron. I love the lines you pick out. Let's hope the next part coming up piques your interest...Daddy's 'bout to go to war!
"The problem with that... I still love her." Beautifully expressed!
These beautiful lines speak VOLUMES, Ben:
"the memory of her soft kiss on my cheek lingers like the shadow of a wasted dream."
"Ronnie stands off to the side, watching with that patient awareness children seem to have whenever someone other than their father hugs their mother."
"... she’d heard from someone that this was a better deal; that someone usually being her mother."
Such a wonderful story.
Thank you so much for your kind words Sharron. I love the lines you pick out. Let's hope the next part coming up piques your interest...Daddy's 'bout to go to war!