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Mar 29, 2023Liked by Ben Woestenburg

That is a very interesting beginning

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Ps. A big ask but can you add chapter links? I was at a certain point (chapter two? Almost at the lion inn) and then the app reset where I was. Also, no rush as it’s the holidays!

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I'll find the time...😏

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I went back and started looking through it. I fixed up to chapter 8 pt2. That'll hold you for a bit I think.

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This beginning hooked me! I’m in!

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I want to thank you so much!

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You’re welcome! I’m up to chapter two and am enjoying it so far. (Although I am getting a bit annoyed by how focused they are on the, ahem, “ladies”.) the details are soooo good though.

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I wanted to make it different from what people think of when they think of Arthur's Knights. "Drunken womanizers," came to mind. I thought, a group of knights travelling to Camelot with a young "bachelor knight" for his first tournament, obviously they're going to take him to a brothel and "break him in."

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Obviously. And I think I am about to find out how that goes (no spoilers for anyone here in the prologue thread)

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