I'm caught up now, and totally invested in the story. I'll look forward to your next installment. This is really fine stuff. You might think about adding links at the end of each installment to previous ones so if readers find you in the middle of something they can easily go back and catch up.
I keep meaning to do that, but when I put the stories up on weekends, Usually hanging with the little woman and forget. I'll go back and fix things in a bit...
I'm caught up now, and totally invested in the story. I'll look forward to your next installment. This is really fine stuff. You might think about adding links at the end of each installment to previous ones so if readers find you in the middle of something they can easily go back and catch up.
I keep meaning to do that, but when I put the stories up on weekends, Usually hanging with the little woman and forget. I'll go back and fix things in a bit...
Powerful. Thanks 🙏 peace
I'm curious to see where you'll go with this one. Thanks, Ben.
Oh...I think you might like this one. It's in three different timelines that all link up together at the end.